Storyboards first Draft

Here is my first draft of my story, so far i have shown this to a few of my lectures, and both have recommended that i cut down the action and change the ending. The action will need to be shorter because it would just take to much time to animate it, and the equipment we are using is just not on par with the current standards of today's technology, plus i will save a lot of time rendering. Here are the list of changes i will be doing:
• Monster wont strike and man wont dodge.

• Monster will grab man straight away and extend his jaw.

 • No more tripping and falling down or monster dashing forward.
For the ending, I will change:

• When the man starts to think of a way out. He thinks about a random object, and a thought bubble appears, with that object in it, and the thought bubble flies towards the rip.

• Man then thinks of himself, then he appears in his own thought bubble.

• The thought bubble floats inside the rip.

 • A picture of a comic book with a rip, in a comic book store is being shown.

 • end