Thursday, March 29, 2012
Inspirational artwork for monster design
Here are some inpirational artwork I've found over the net, so far i was thinking of making my monster very bulky and fat, to contrast the main character who is lanky.
Thursday, March 22, 2012
Week 2-5 summary
Sorry i've been very forgetful lately and been forgeting to write summary.
Week 2
In week 2 I've finally finished my syopsis and treatment, And started my shot list. At first i had trouble with the ending but i talked it through with the lecturers and came up with a conclusion in the end.
Week 3
In week 3 i was able to finish of my first draft of my shot list, also i did some concept art for my characters. After showing my shot list to my lecturers they suggestested that ill add more shots and differant angles.
Week 4
In week 4, i was able to finish my final shot list, and start my first draft of my script. I couldnt do much more, because i had to finish off other assignments.
Week 5
In week 5, i got my first draft script done, and showed it to all my lecturers, now i just finish my second draft.
Week 2
In week 2 I've finally finished my syopsis and treatment, And started my shot list. At first i had trouble with the ending but i talked it through with the lecturers and came up with a conclusion in the end.
Week 3
In week 3 i was able to finish of my first draft of my shot list, also i did some concept art for my characters. After showing my shot list to my lecturers they suggestested that ill add more shots and differant angles.
Week 4
In week 4, i was able to finish my final shot list, and start my first draft of my script. I couldnt do much more, because i had to finish off other assignments.
Week 5
In week 5, i got my first draft script done, and showed it to all my lecturers, now i just finish my second draft.
Some more inspiration
Hrmm i was thinking of changing my setting from a jungle to a bambo forest. Since a bambo forest is more simple yet i am able to hide some monsters and creatures in the trees.
Below is the Joker in Batman's suit,as you can see the artist made a 3d model with with textures that maded the character look 2d, this is simular to what i want to achieve.
Below is the Joker in Batman's suit,as you can see the artist made a 3d model with with textures that maded the character look 2d, this is simular to what i want to achieve.
Script second Draft
EXT. Lush jungle-Afternoon
PAN through the jungle, silhouettes of various creatures can be seen.
ELS WORM POV of a cloudy blue sky.
A portal opens up and a MAN with a bikers attire, overweight, falls through.
LS of MAN as he hits the ground belly first, with a explosion of dust, the dust clears up.
MS MAN sits up and blinks, looks around, and gets up.The dust continues to clear up.
BCU of the MAN'S face as he looks around confused.
ELS MAN starts to explore the jungle, he walks around slowly and inspects various plants, he looks across and sees a comic book border. A mysterious silhouette of a humanoid creature can be seen in the background.
ZOOM OUT to reveal that the MAN is in a comic book.
MS MAN pushes the borders, and he realises that he is stuck.
Cu of MONSTER while he growls
MCU A MONSTER lunges towards the MAN and tries to strike the MAN.
Ws of MAN & MONSTER.
MS MAN dodges the first strike.
MCU MAN blocks the second strike.
MLS MONSTER tackles downs the MAN onto the ground.
CU of MANS face as it collides with the ground
MCU MONSTER opens up its jaw, as he dislocates it so that it is big enough to swallow the MAN'S face.
MAN
AHHH!
MS MAN screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impales the MONSTER'S face.
CU of speech bubble
CU of MAN'S face, confused
ECU of the MONSTER face as it bleeds (suggestion: LS have the monster flailing around with the sharp speech bubble stuck in its head - the monster falls dead)
MCU of the MAN'S hands as they pull out the speech bubble and throw it away.
MAN
Hrm?
LS of MAN with a speech bubble with the words Hrm? in it.
MS MAN grabs the speech bubble and squeezes it, and bounces it on the ground.
LS Man grabs the speech bubble and squeezes it, and bounces it on the ground.
Panning ELS MAN jumps on the speech bubble (like a bunny hop toy) and uses it to ride across to the next border.
LS of MAN bounces through shot
MLS – he bounces and bounces on the bunny hop speech bubble until he bounces high enough to get out of the frame) MAN grabs the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel.
MLS – he looses the speech bubble in flight MAN lands, and jumps down to a different panel in an desert island with a single palm tree.
MCU MAN is confused and starts to punch a tree out of frustration."Pow" and "Bam" words start to appear and fall onto his head - then he scream ouch - an ouch appears and also falls on his head - he puts his hands over his mouth to stop being pummeled.
CU MAN'S eyes appear confused.
MLS MAN sits down and starts to have a think.
MCU A thought bubble starts to pop out.
ELS MAN grabs the bubble and starts to float up for a bit.
LS the thought bubble pops.
Bird POV – MAN falls down on the ground.
Maybe cut out fall & guy floats up from 1st thought bubble
MLS MAN sits down and starts to have a think again and
makes another thought bubble.
MS as he concentrates more and jumps on the thought bubble.
while on top he concentrates further and another bubble appears above him. He climb the next one, thinks, make another bubble, climbs, thinks, climbs, thinks...
Worm POV We see a stairway of thought bubbles that reach up to the sky.
He continues to jump on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it. He sees into the next panel and sees a girl in the shower and his thoughts are lost, the bubbles disappear and he plummets back to the island and rips through the page.
Hang on thr ripped hole for awhile.
Int. Comic book store
MLS a young boy is reading a comic, he turns a page and the panel with the palm tree has a big rip through it.
The End.
Thanks to Josie and Jarod for editing.
PAN through the jungle, silhouettes of various creatures can be seen.
ELS WORM POV of a cloudy blue sky.
A portal opens up and a MAN with a bikers attire, overweight, falls through.
LS of MAN as he hits the ground belly first, with a explosion of dust, the dust clears up.
MS MAN sits up and blinks, looks around, and gets up.The dust continues to clear up.
BCU of the MAN'S face as he looks around confused.
ELS MAN starts to explore the jungle, he walks around slowly and inspects various plants, he looks across and sees a comic book border. A mysterious silhouette of a humanoid creature can be seen in the background.
ZOOM OUT to reveal that the MAN is in a comic book.
MS MAN pushes the borders, and he realises that he is stuck.
Cu of MONSTER while he growls
MCU A MONSTER lunges towards the MAN and tries to strike the MAN.
Ws of MAN & MONSTER.
MS MAN dodges the first strike.
MCU MAN blocks the second strike.
MLS MONSTER tackles downs the MAN onto the ground.
CU of MANS face as it collides with the ground
MCU MONSTER opens up its jaw, as he dislocates it so that it is big enough to swallow the MAN'S face.
MAN
AHHH!
MS MAN screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impales the MONSTER'S face.
CU of speech bubble
CU of MAN'S face, confused
ECU of the MONSTER face as it bleeds (suggestion: LS have the monster flailing around with the sharp speech bubble stuck in its head - the monster falls dead)
MCU of the MAN'S hands as they pull out the speech bubble and throw it away.
MAN
Hrm?
LS of MAN with a speech bubble with the words Hrm? in it.
MS MAN grabs the speech bubble and squeezes it, and bounces it on the ground.
LS Man grabs the speech bubble and squeezes it, and bounces it on the ground.
Panning ELS MAN jumps on the speech bubble (like a bunny hop toy) and uses it to ride across to the next border.
LS of MAN bounces through shot
MLS – he bounces and bounces on the bunny hop speech bubble until he bounces high enough to get out of the frame) MAN grabs the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel.
MLS – he looses the speech bubble in flight MAN lands, and jumps down to a different panel in an desert island with a single palm tree.
MCU MAN is confused and starts to punch a tree out of frustration."Pow" and "Bam" words start to appear and fall onto his head - then he scream ouch - an ouch appears and also falls on his head - he puts his hands over his mouth to stop being pummeled.
CU MAN'S eyes appear confused.
MLS MAN sits down and starts to have a think.
MCU A thought bubble starts to pop out.
ELS MAN grabs the bubble and starts to float up for a bit.
LS the thought bubble pops.
Bird POV – MAN falls down on the ground.
Maybe cut out fall & guy floats up from 1st thought bubble
MLS MAN sits down and starts to have a think again and
makes another thought bubble.
MS as he concentrates more and jumps on the thought bubble.
while on top he concentrates further and another bubble appears above him. He climb the next one, thinks, make another bubble, climbs, thinks, climbs, thinks...
Worm POV We see a stairway of thought bubbles that reach up to the sky.
He continues to jump on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it. He sees into the next panel and sees a girl in the shower and his thoughts are lost, the bubbles disappear and he plummets back to the island and rips through the page.
Hang on thr ripped hole for awhile.
Int. Comic book store
MLS a young boy is reading a comic, he turns a page and the panel with the palm tree has a big rip through it.
The End.
Thanks to Josie and Jarod for editing.
Monday, March 12, 2012
Art Direction
Here is some inspiration for my art direction.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmKgHYN1AIM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmKgHYN1AIM
Script First Draft
EXT. Lush jungle-Afternoon
PAN of the jungle, silhouettes of various creatures can be seen.
WORM POV of a clear blue sky.
ELS a portal opens up and a MAN with a bikers attire, overweight, falls through.
LS of man hitting the ground belly first, with a explosion of dust, the dust clears up.
MS man sits up blinks, looks around, and gets up.
BCU of the man face looking around confused.
ELS man starts to explore the jungle, he walks around slowly inspecting various plants, he looks across and see a comic book border. A silhouette of a humanoid creature can be seen.
ZOOM OUT to reveal that the man is in a comic book.
MS Man pushes the borders, and he realises that he is stuck.
MCU A MONSTER lunges towards the man and tries to strike the man.
MS Man dodges the first strike.
MCU man blocks the second strike.
MLS monster tackles downs the man onto the ground.
MCU Monster opens up his jaw and dislocates it, its jaw now big enough to cover the man's face.
MAN
AHHH!
MS man screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impaling the face.
CU of speech bubble
CU of man's face being confused
ECU of the monster face bleeding
Panning MLS of man pushing the monster with both of his hands.
Panning ELS of the monster being pushed through a border.
Panning LS the Panel expands showing more scenery.
MS Man pulls the speech bubble out of the monster's face with some resistance.
MCU of the man's hands pulling out the speech bubble.
CU speech bubble sliding off the monster, with blood dripping down and places it on his back.
MAN
Hrm?
LS of Man with a speech bubble with the words Hrm? in it.
MS Man grabs the speech bubble and squeezes it, and bounces it on the ground.
Panning ELS Man jumps on the speech bubble and uses it to ride across to the next border.
LS Man reaches the border.
MLS – Man is grabbing the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel.
MLS – Man lands, and jumps down to a different panel.
MCU Man is confused and starts to punch a tree out of frustration.
CU Man's eyes is confused.
MLS Man sits down and starts to have a think.
MCU A thought bubble starts to pop out.
ELS Man grabs the bubble and starts to float up for a bit.
LS the thought bubble pops.
Bird POV – Man falls down on the ground.
MLS Man makes another thought bubble.
MS Man grabs it, and throws it above him.
MCU Man jumps while he makes another thought bubble.
ELS He lands on the first thought bubble and throws a second thought bubble above him.
Worm POV He continues jumping on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it.
CU on his feet jumping on the thought bubbles.
MS of man jumping on thought bubbles.
MS Man punches the sky but the sky absorbs his punch.
MLS Man forearm and hand punching the sky.
MCU Man punches the sky twice, yet it still doesn’t breaks.
LS – Man punches sky even more
CU zooming out to LS - Man goes berserk and does hundreds of punches and rips sky.
INT. Comic book store
MLS a young boy is reading a comic, and a man pops out.
The End.
PAN of the jungle, silhouettes of various creatures can be seen.
WORM POV of a clear blue sky.
ELS a portal opens up and a MAN with a bikers attire, overweight, falls through.
LS of man hitting the ground belly first, with a explosion of dust, the dust clears up.
MS man sits up blinks, looks around, and gets up.
BCU of the man face looking around confused.
ELS man starts to explore the jungle, he walks around slowly inspecting various plants, he looks across and see a comic book border. A silhouette of a humanoid creature can be seen.
ZOOM OUT to reveal that the man is in a comic book.
MS Man pushes the borders, and he realises that he is stuck.
MCU A MONSTER lunges towards the man and tries to strike the man.
MS Man dodges the first strike.
MCU man blocks the second strike.
MLS monster tackles downs the man onto the ground.
MCU Monster opens up his jaw and dislocates it, its jaw now big enough to cover the man's face.
MAN
AHHH!
MS man screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impaling the face.
CU of speech bubble
CU of man's face being confused
ECU of the monster face bleeding
Panning MLS of man pushing the monster with both of his hands.
Panning ELS of the monster being pushed through a border.
Panning LS the Panel expands showing more scenery.
MS Man pulls the speech bubble out of the monster's face with some resistance.
MCU of the man's hands pulling out the speech bubble.
CU speech bubble sliding off the monster, with blood dripping down and places it on his back.
MAN
Hrm?
LS of Man with a speech bubble with the words Hrm? in it.
MS Man grabs the speech bubble and squeezes it, and bounces it on the ground.
Panning ELS Man jumps on the speech bubble and uses it to ride across to the next border.
LS Man reaches the border.
MLS – Man is grabbing the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel.
MLS – Man lands, and jumps down to a different panel.
MCU Man is confused and starts to punch a tree out of frustration.
CU Man's eyes is confused.
MLS Man sits down and starts to have a think.
MCU A thought bubble starts to pop out.
ELS Man grabs the bubble and starts to float up for a bit.
LS the thought bubble pops.
Bird POV – Man falls down on the ground.
MLS Man makes another thought bubble.
MS Man grabs it, and throws it above him.
MCU Man jumps while he makes another thought bubble.
ELS He lands on the first thought bubble and throws a second thought bubble above him.
Worm POV He continues jumping on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it.
CU on his feet jumping on the thought bubbles.
MS of man jumping on thought bubbles.
MS Man punches the sky but the sky absorbs his punch.
MLS Man forearm and hand punching the sky.
MCU Man punches the sky twice, yet it still doesn’t breaks.
LS – Man punches sky even more
CU zooming out to LS - Man goes berserk and does hundreds of punches and rips sky.
INT. Comic book store
MLS a young boy is reading a comic, and a man pops out.
The End.
Monday, March 5, 2012
Shot list Version 2
Shot List
Pan ELS – of the jungle. 4secs
Worm POV - clear blue sky 3 secs
ELS - a portal opens up and a man falls out of a sky. 4 secs
LS – Of man hitting the ground – 3 secs
WS – Man gets up, daze and confused. 3secs
BCU - of the man face looking confused 3 secs
ELS - Man exploring the jungle, a shadow of a creature can be seen in the background. 3secs
MLS – of man looking around. 2 secs
Pan CU- of the environment and man looking around. 3-5 secs
MLS- Man realises he is stuck in a comic. 3 secs
MS – of man pushing out the comic boarders. 3secs
MCU – Monster jumps towards, the man. 3secs
MS – Man dodges the first strike. 2 secs
MCU – Man blocks the second strike. 2 secs
MLS – Monster tackles downs the man. 3sec
MCU – Monster strikes the man. 2 sec
CU – of the Man and monster faces. 2 secs
MS – Man screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impaling the monster. 3 secs
CU- of speech bubble 2 secs
CU- man is confused 2secs
ECU – of the monster bleeding 2 secs
Panning MLS – Man pushes the monster up 2secs
Paning ELS - Man punches it through a comic book boarder 2secs
Paning LS – the panel is bigger 2secs
MS – Man pulls the speech bubble out the monster. 2 secs
MCU – mans hands pulling out the speech bubble. 2secs
CU – of speech bubble sliding off the monster. 2secs
LS - Man says “Hrm?” and makes a normal speech bubble 3 secs
MS - Man plays with the speech bubble and realises that it’s quite bouncy. 3secs
Panning ELS – Man jumps on the speech bubble and uses it to ride across to the next border. 4 secs
LS – Man reaches the border. 2 secs
MLS – Man is grabbing the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel. 2 secs
MLS – Man lands, and jumps down to a different panel. 3 secs
MCU – Man is confused and is frustrated. 3 sec
CU – Man face is confused. 2 secs
MLS – sits down and starts to have a think. 3 secs
MCU - A thought bubble starts to pop out. 2 secs
ELS – Man grabs the bubble and starts to float up for a bit. 4 secs.
LS – Thought bubble pops. 2 secs
Bird POV – man falls down on the ground. 3 secs
MLS – Man uses a thought bubble. 2 secs
MS - grabs it, and throws it above him. 3 secs
MCU - jumps while he makes another thought bubble. 3secs
ELS - he lands on the first thought bubble and throws a second thought bubble above him. 3secs
Worm POV – He continues jumping on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it. 4secs
CU – on his feet jumping on the thought bubbles. 3 secs
MS – of man jumping on thought bubbles. -3 secs
MS – Man punches the sky but the sky absorbs his punch. 2 secs
MLS – Man forearm and hand punching the sky. -2 secs
MCU – Man punches the sky twice, yet it still doesn’t breaks. 3 secs
LS – Man punches sky even more – 2 secs
CU zooming out to LS- Man goes berserk and does hundreds of punches and rips sky. 4 secs
MLS – a young boy is reading a comic, and a man pops out. 2 secs
The End.
Total 154secs
Pan ELS – of the jungle. 4secs
Worm POV - clear blue sky 3 secs
ELS - a portal opens up and a man falls out of a sky. 4 secs
LS – Of man hitting the ground – 3 secs
WS – Man gets up, daze and confused. 3secs
BCU - of the man face looking confused 3 secs
ELS - Man exploring the jungle, a shadow of a creature can be seen in the background. 3secs
MLS – of man looking around. 2 secs
Pan CU- of the environment and man looking around. 3-5 secs
MLS- Man realises he is stuck in a comic. 3 secs
MS – of man pushing out the comic boarders. 3secs
MCU – Monster jumps towards, the man. 3secs
MS – Man dodges the first strike. 2 secs
MCU – Man blocks the second strike. 2 secs
MLS – Monster tackles downs the man. 3sec
MCU – Monster strikes the man. 2 sec
CU – of the Man and monster faces. 2 secs
MS – Man screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impaling the monster. 3 secs
CU- of speech bubble 2 secs
CU- man is confused 2secs
ECU – of the monster bleeding 2 secs
Panning MLS – Man pushes the monster up 2secs
Paning ELS - Man punches it through a comic book boarder 2secs
Paning LS – the panel is bigger 2secs
MS – Man pulls the speech bubble out the monster. 2 secs
MCU – mans hands pulling out the speech bubble. 2secs
CU – of speech bubble sliding off the monster. 2secs
LS - Man says “Hrm?” and makes a normal speech bubble 3 secs
MS - Man plays with the speech bubble and realises that it’s quite bouncy. 3secs
Panning ELS – Man jumps on the speech bubble and uses it to ride across to the next border. 4 secs
LS – Man reaches the border. 2 secs
MLS – Man is grabbing the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel. 2 secs
MLS – Man lands, and jumps down to a different panel. 3 secs
MCU – Man is confused and is frustrated. 3 sec
CU – Man face is confused. 2 secs
MLS – sits down and starts to have a think. 3 secs
MCU - A thought bubble starts to pop out. 2 secs
ELS – Man grabs the bubble and starts to float up for a bit. 4 secs.
LS – Thought bubble pops. 2 secs
Bird POV – man falls down on the ground. 3 secs
MLS – Man uses a thought bubble. 2 secs
MS - grabs it, and throws it above him. 3 secs
MCU - jumps while he makes another thought bubble. 3secs
ELS - he lands on the first thought bubble and throws a second thought bubble above him. 3secs
Worm POV – He continues jumping on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it. 4secs
CU – on his feet jumping on the thought bubbles. 3 secs
MS – of man jumping on thought bubbles. -3 secs
MS – Man punches the sky but the sky absorbs his punch. 2 secs
MLS – Man forearm and hand punching the sky. -2 secs
MCU – Man punches the sky twice, yet it still doesn’t breaks. 3 secs
LS – Man punches sky even more – 2 secs
CU zooming out to LS- Man goes berserk and does hundreds of punches and rips sky. 4 secs
MLS – a young boy is reading a comic, and a man pops out. 2 secs
The End.
Total 154secs
Thursday, March 1, 2012
Shot List
Shot List
Worm POV - clear blue sky, a portal opens up and a man falls out of a sky. 3-5secs
WS – Man gets up, daze and confused. 3secs
ELS - Man exploring the jungle, a shadow of a creature can be seen in the background. 5-8secs
MLS- Man realises he is stuck in a comic. 3-5secs
MCU – Monster jumps towards, the man. 3secs
MS – Man dodges the first strike. 2 secs
MLS – Monster tackles downs the man. 3sec
MCU – Monster strikes the man. 2 sec
MS – Man screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impaling the monster. 3 secs
Tracking MLS – Man pushes the monster up, and he punches it through a comic book boarder opening up a new panel. 4 secs
MS – Man pulls the speech bubble out the monster. 2 secs
LS - Man makes a normal speech bubble, and realises that it’s quite bouncy. 4 secs
Tracking ELS – Man jumps on the speech bubble and uses it to ride across to the next border. 4 secs
LS – Man reaches the border. 2 secs
MLS – Man is grabbing the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel. 2 secs
MLS – Man lands, and jumps down to a different panel. 3 secs
MCU – Man is confused and is frustrated. 3 sec
MLS – sits down and starts to have a think. 3 secs
MCU - A thought bubble starts to pop out. 2 secs
ELS – Man starts to float up for a bit. 4 secs.
LS – Thought bubble pops. 2 secs
Bird POV – man falls down on the ground. 3 secs
MLS – Man uses a thought bubble, grabs it, and throws it above him, and jumps while he makes another thought bubble, he lands on the first thought bubble and throws a second thought bubble above him. 5-7 secs
Worm POV – He continues jumping on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it. 4secs
MS – Man punches the sky but the sky absorbs his punch. 2 secs
MCU – Man punches the sky twice, yet it still doesn’t breaks. 3 secs
CU zooming out to LS- Man goes berserk and does hundreds of punches and rips sky. 4 secs
MLS – a young boy is reading a comic, and a fist pops out of a page he was reading. 3 secs
The End.
its 92 seconds. YAY!
Worm POV - clear blue sky, a portal opens up and a man falls out of a sky. 3-5secs
WS – Man gets up, daze and confused. 3secs
ELS - Man exploring the jungle, a shadow of a creature can be seen in the background. 5-8secs
MLS- Man realises he is stuck in a comic. 3-5secs
MCU – Monster jumps towards, the man. 3secs
MS – Man dodges the first strike. 2 secs
MLS – Monster tackles downs the man. 3sec
MCU – Monster strikes the man. 2 sec
MS – Man screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impaling the monster. 3 secs
Tracking MLS – Man pushes the monster up, and he punches it through a comic book boarder opening up a new panel. 4 secs
MS – Man pulls the speech bubble out the monster. 2 secs
LS - Man makes a normal speech bubble, and realises that it’s quite bouncy. 4 secs
Tracking ELS – Man jumps on the speech bubble and uses it to ride across to the next border. 4 secs
LS – Man reaches the border. 2 secs
MLS – Man is grabbing the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel. 2 secs
MLS – Man lands, and jumps down to a different panel. 3 secs
MCU – Man is confused and is frustrated. 3 sec
MLS – sits down and starts to have a think. 3 secs
MCU - A thought bubble starts to pop out. 2 secs
ELS – Man starts to float up for a bit. 4 secs.
LS – Thought bubble pops. 2 secs
Bird POV – man falls down on the ground. 3 secs
MLS – Man uses a thought bubble, grabs it, and throws it above him, and jumps while he makes another thought bubble, he lands on the first thought bubble and throws a second thought bubble above him. 5-7 secs
Worm POV – He continues jumping on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it. 4secs
MS – Man punches the sky but the sky absorbs his punch. 2 secs
MCU – Man punches the sky twice, yet it still doesn’t breaks. 3 secs
CU zooming out to LS- Man goes berserk and does hundreds of punches and rips sky. 4 secs
MLS – a young boy is reading a comic, and a fist pops out of a page he was reading. 3 secs
The End.
its 92 seconds. YAY!
Treatment
Treatment
A portal opens up and a man falls out of it and into a jungle like world. He gets up feeling dazed and confused, he opens his eyes and realises that he is not where he is supposed to be and starts to panic for a bit. Soon he calms down and starts analysing his surroundings and realises that he see what seems too be an edge of a comic boarder and tries to push out of it but fails. Soon after he is attacked by a humanoid like creature with snake like fangs. The creature pins him down and punches him, making the man scream, which makes a speech bubble pop out impaling the creature, the man gets up and punches the creature through a comic boarder. He grabs the speech bubble and starts to experiment with it and soon he realises that he can move between panels. After experimenting, he realises that he can’t escape. Soon he calms downs, and lies down on the floor, while lying down he realises that he hasn’t tried flying in the sky. He starts to think of an idea which causes a thought bubble to appear above him, which makes him float for a bit, before popping. He starts using thought bubbles as a floating platform to jump on to reach the sky. After reaching the sky he bumps into the edge of the comic and soon he starts to punch his way out into his world.
so far i am quite happen with the story, but there are some plot hole when he is experimenting with world, its just seem a bit random to me, but i guess he needs to do it so he can know the bounderies of the world.
A portal opens up and a man falls out of it and into a jungle like world. He gets up feeling dazed and confused, he opens his eyes and realises that he is not where he is supposed to be and starts to panic for a bit. Soon he calms down and starts analysing his surroundings and realises that he see what seems too be an edge of a comic boarder and tries to push out of it but fails. Soon after he is attacked by a humanoid like creature with snake like fangs. The creature pins him down and punches him, making the man scream, which makes a speech bubble pop out impaling the creature, the man gets up and punches the creature through a comic boarder. He grabs the speech bubble and starts to experiment with it and soon he realises that he can move between panels. After experimenting, he realises that he can’t escape. Soon he calms downs, and lies down on the floor, while lying down he realises that he hasn’t tried flying in the sky. He starts to think of an idea which causes a thought bubble to appear above him, which makes him float for a bit, before popping. He starts using thought bubbles as a floating platform to jump on to reach the sky. After reaching the sky he bumps into the edge of the comic and soon he starts to punch his way out into his world.
so far i am quite happen with the story, but there are some plot hole when he is experimenting with world, its just seem a bit random to me, but i guess he needs to do it so he can know the bounderies of the world.
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