Script second Draft

EXT. Lush jungle-Afternoon

PAN through the jungle, silhouettes of various creatures can be seen.

ELS WORM POV of a cloudy blue sky.

A portal opens up and a MAN with a bikers attire, overweight, falls through.

LS of MAN as he hits the ground belly first, with a explosion of dust, the dust clears up.

MS MAN sits up and blinks, looks around, and gets up.The dust continues to clear up.

BCU of the MAN'S face as he looks around confused.

ELS MAN starts to explore the jungle, he walks around slowly and inspects various plants, he looks across and sees a comic book border. A mysterious silhouette of a humanoid creature can be seen in the background.

ZOOM OUT to reveal that the MAN is in a comic book.

MS MAN pushes the borders, and he realises that he is stuck.

Cu of MONSTER while he growls

MCU A MONSTER lunges towards the MAN and tries to strike the MAN.

Ws of MAN & MONSTER.

MS MAN dodges the first strike.

MCU MAN blocks the second strike.

MLS MONSTER tackles downs the MAN onto the ground.

CU of MANS face as it collides with the ground

MCU MONSTER opens up its jaw, as he dislocates it so that it is big enough to swallow the MAN'S face.

MAN

AHHH!

MS MAN screams and a sharp speech bubble pops out, impales the MONSTER'S face.

CU of speech bubble

CU of MAN'S face, confused

ECU of the MONSTER face as it bleeds (suggestion: LS have the monster flailing around with the sharp speech bubble stuck in its head - the monster falls dead)

MCU of the MAN'S hands as they pull out the speech bubble and throw it away.

MAN

Hrm?

LS of MAN with a speech bubble with the words Hrm? in it.

MS MAN grabs the speech bubble and squeezes it, and bounces it on the ground.

LS Man grabs the speech bubble and squeezes it, and bounces it on the ground.

Panning ELS MAN jumps on the speech bubble (like a bunny hop toy) and uses it to ride across to the next border.

LS of MAN bounces through shot

MLS – he bounces and bounces on the bunny hop speech bubble until he bounces high enough to get out of the frame) MAN grabs the end of the border and pulls him self across to the next panel.

MLS – he looses the speech bubble in flight MAN lands, and jumps down to a different panel in an desert island with a single palm tree.

MCU MAN is confused and starts to punch a tree out of frustration."Pow" and "Bam" words start to appear and fall onto his head - then he scream ouch - an ouch appears and also falls on his head - he puts his hands over his mouth to stop being pummeled.

CU MAN'S eyes appear confused.

MLS MAN sits down and starts to have a think.

MCU A thought bubble starts to pop out.

ELS MAN grabs the bubble and starts to float up for a bit.

LS the thought bubble pops.

Bird POV – MAN falls down on the ground.

Maybe cut out fall & guy floats up from 1st thought bubble

MLS MAN sits down and starts to have a think again and
makes another thought bubble.

MS as he concentrates more and jumps on the thought bubble.

while on top he concentrates further and another bubble appears above him. He climb the next one, thinks, make another bubble, climbs, thinks, climbs, thinks...

Worm POV We see a stairway of thought bubbles that reach up to the sky.

He continues to jump on a thought bubbles until he reaches the sky and bumps into it. He sees into the next panel and sees a girl in the shower and his thoughts are lost, the bubbles disappear and he plummets back to the island and rips through the page.

Hang on thr ripped hole for awhile.

Int. Comic book store

MLS a young boy is reading a comic, he turns a page and the panel with the palm tree has a big rip through it.

The End.


Thanks to Josie and Jarod for editing.