Treatment

Treatment

A portal opens up and a man falls out of it and into a jungle like world. He gets up feeling dazed and confused, he opens his eyes and realises that he is not where he is supposed to be and starts to panic for a bit. Soon he calms down and starts analysing his surroundings and realises that he see what seems too be an edge of a comic boarder and tries to push out of it but fails. Soon after he is attacked by a humanoid like creature with snake like fangs. The creature pins him down and punches him, making the man scream, which makes a speech bubble pop out impaling the creature, the man gets up and punches the creature through a comic boarder. He grabs the speech bubble and starts to experiment with it and soon he realises that he can move between panels. After experimenting, he realises that he can’t escape. Soon he calms downs, and lies down on the floor, while lying down he realises that he hasn’t tried flying in the sky. He starts to think of an idea which causes a thought bubble to appear above him, which makes him float for a bit, before popping. He starts using thought bubbles as a floating platform to jump on to reach the sky. After reaching the sky he bumps into the edge of the comic and soon he starts to punch his way out into his world.

so far i am quite happen with the story, but there are some plot hole when he is experimenting with world, its just seem a bit random to me, but i guess he needs to do it so he can know the bounderies of the world.